I am a Year 4 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teachers are Mr Brown and Ms Lange. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, as it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I like to watch the Olympics It is very interesting and cool I competed in the Olympics I would compete in gymnastics because it looks fun you can come first second and third it started and 1913.
Kia ora Piper, The Olympics have been interesting to watch haven't they? I think if you ask Ruby she might paint a different story, maybe fun to a point but really hard work too? I thought you might do skateboarding like Skye Brown! I would like you to revisit this post and think, Where should the full stops go? New idea - new sentence! Which question are you researching for Inquiry? Ka kite Ms Lange
Kia ora Piper,
ReplyDeleteThe Olympics have been interesting to watch haven't they? I think if you ask Ruby she might paint a different story, maybe fun to a point but really hard work too? I thought you might do skateboarding like Skye Brown!
I would like you to revisit this post and think, Where should the full stops go? New idea - new sentence!
Which question are you researching for Inquiry?
Ka kite
Ms Lange